u/Bendypineaple

I'm currently designing my first tattoo and I want to know if a tattoo artist would recommend i thin the lines of this design?

I like the current line thickness, but would it change if it was sized smaller, wouldn't want it that big obviously but I just drew it that size to get the design how i wanted it to look.

also if the gap between the X and 2 is very thin gap margin wise, would that be an issue too?

I can sensitive skin due to tism and think i have an "average" amount of pain tolerance, ( whatever average means anyway lol )