It's about 1100 words.. Just want general advice and criticism on my writing style, the plot, is it entertaining/boring? does it sound coherant etc.
The first 2 paras are from a stream of consiousness I did in a sensory visceral style exercise, and the writing after is imo the best of a series of exercises I did based on it. So any thoughts would be appreciated thanks.
It's about 1100 words.. Just want general advice and criticism on my writing style, the plot, is it entertaining/boring? does it sound coherant etc.
The first 2 paras are from a stream of consiousness I did in a sensory visceral style exercise, and the writing after is imo the best of a series of exercises I did based on it. So any thoughts would be appreciated thanks.
Looking to buy it in the uk, but it's now out of stock with Books etc and other outlets have it at higher prices closer to the rrp...so it's good news it's selling well, but bad news as I haven't got it yet and can't afford the higher prices..