u/Basic-Shelter2854

I was recently in that mood when suddenly understand the importance of keeping in touch with your loved ones. And I write these lyrics and decided to basically read it to music rather then sing, and uploaded to SC: https://soundcloud.com/victorbolshov/say-the-words?si=a69f642faa7342a1aba9993d6fa45062&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Just like everyone else here, I'd appreciate any feedback, and will be super happy if you happen to like it. I'd characterize the music as some psychedelic rock, but does it really matter?

Say the words

Say the words,

Drop a line,

Call your mom,

Call your dad,

Kiss your lover.

Meet your sister

And your brother,

And your friend.

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Look at the sun,

Look at the river,

It’s beautiful,

And so are you.

And so are you,

A fucking cavern of treasures,

Don’t forget it,

Don’t let yourself go.

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Say the words,

Drop a line,

Call your mom,

Call your dad,

Kiss your lover.

Meet your sister

And your brother,

And your friend.

--

Say the words,

Word is magic.

World is magic,

And so are you.

u/Basic-Shelter2854 — 12 days ago

Here’s a song I finished writing today. It is about the abusive relationship between humanity and nature.

https://youtube.com/shorts/MKwZgv6FC1c?is=RQ7Xkb\_XumoC69R\_

I had a dream

I had a dream:

I was a crawling monster,

I was a creature of the night.

I hid in leaves,

I licked the stones for moisture,

With no one ever by my side.

I didn’t count

The times I drowned,

The times I lost the will to breathe.

Next sunny day

They come my way,

They will be hunting for my teeth.

I had a dream,

I was a multicolored

Gorgeous bird with golden wings.

I was believed

To see beneath the covers,

The bird of gods, the bird of kings.

They never cared,

They surely dared

To pull my feathers for their muse.

They followed me,

They found me,

Now I’m just naked and confused.

u/Basic-Shelter2854 — 15 days ago