u/BanditLags

Teachers gave good marks on my panel but I wanna see if my basic panel make up gets torn up

Teachers gave good marks on my panel but I wanna see if my basic panel make up gets torn up

For background im an 8th month student and been doing panel make up for fun in my 2nd and 3rd month.

Funny note my current teacher said he prefers the left side while my previous teacher said he prefers the right side. Both been in the trade for awhile so its pretty funny. I know panel make up is like supppper basic stuff least from what I understand.

My teachers notes: neutrals could bee a bit cleaner and right side could of had a sharper 90 and less swoopy. Also labeling with the number book but I couldn't get it to stick cuz I was doing it wrong.

Please rip apart my panel I wanna get good in my work

Edit: since its pointed out a lot THE MAIN FEED WASNT ME, the power from the top was installed by my school KOs being exposed isn't a big big deal nor is the focus my teacher already knows its expected that a panel being used by different students over the months will have a lot of KOs and isn't requiring us to use covers since its not the main focus.

Also also this isn't bait, I'm genuinely asking for feedback on this and I thank everyone who is leaving very detailed responses and notes im taking their notes because I value actual feedback that isn't bs i don't know a lot but I've been in the trades to know what feedback is value :D

u/BanditLags — 1 day ago

This idea came to me while I was at work did the first two sketches in one class period(work as an educator) then finished it on Saturday. This is the first full artwork I've done after years of burn out and I'm really happy with my results.

I'm not a deep vocaloid fan just a casual one that listens to a very small handful but I really had fun listening to each of the vocaloids songs when I was drawing them.

Thought process behind the drawing: each of the vocaloids are in a iconic pose miku doing her miku miku beam, teto doing her idle pose in thats used in a lot of "official art work" and neru well her I couldn't find a lot of poses (and artwork) that seem iconic but as you can see with the progress pictures I redid her section with her flip phone instead but I love how it came out!

And I had them saying their "domain names" for fun and I did it based on popular songs and ones that sounded like a cool domain name. If yall think of a better song for each of the triple bakas let me know ill consider changing it when I draw this digitally like I said before im a very basic and not too deep in vocaloids.

u/BanditLags — 10 days ago