
Teachers gave good marks on my panel but I wanna see if my basic panel make up gets torn up
For background im an 8th month student and been doing panel make up for fun in my 2nd and 3rd month.
Funny note my current teacher said he prefers the left side while my previous teacher said he prefers the right side. Both been in the trade for awhile so its pretty funny. I know panel make up is like supppper basic stuff least from what I understand.
My teachers notes: neutrals could bee a bit cleaner and right side could of had a sharper 90 and less swoopy. Also labeling with the number book but I couldn't get it to stick cuz I was doing it wrong.
Please rip apart my panel I wanna get good in my work
Edit: since its pointed out a lot THE MAIN FEED WASNT ME, the power from the top was installed by my school KOs being exposed isn't a big big deal nor is the focus my teacher already knows its expected that a panel being used by different students over the months will have a lot of KOs and isn't requiring us to use covers since its not the main focus.
Also also this isn't bait, I'm genuinely asking for feedback on this and I thank everyone who is leaving very detailed responses and notes im taking their notes because I value actual feedback that isn't bs i don't know a lot but I've been in the trades to know what feedback is value :D