u/Asphalt-GamerZ

Crazed I was to believe in such faith,

Broken free from delusion, albeit too late.

I am lost in a pool of blood, my own.

Was it worth the fragility I have shown?

/

The blame is upon me, for I have the key

To open my heart, had it not been for thee.

A bittersweet symphony, your words are,

Verily, a lesson to memorize.

/

You allowed me your grace for a fleeting second,

Perhaps longer, I must reckon.

Though these words may be met with lecturing,

Grant me this selfish wish to ease my suffering.

/

Let us meet our lips one last time,

So i may taste the poison in your saliva,

And remember how the same tongue that once bathed me with love,

Would then stab my feeble heart.

/

what do yall think of the title too plz

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1sxq0wn/comment/ojk6yxa/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button

and

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1t1y7m9/comment/ojk5iqj/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button

Thank u in advance :)