Does my script’s story make sense? Looking for feedback!
Hey everyone!
Summary of the script:
A joker-like knight and a naive healer team up to save their separate villages, both cursed by a big bad mage. They’re so close to finding the last ingredient they need. Will they succeed and save their villages?
Probably, but find out how their love changes and blossoms during the last part of their exciting adventure!
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With the big AI demonetization happening, it feels like the perfect time to share my script.
In my opinion, it’s as good as done, but I’m scared the script doesn’t make sense for a script reader or as an audio script. So I’d love your opinion, whether you’re a reader, listener, fellow scriptwriter, or script filler. What are your thoughts? What needs to be looked at or changed for the script to make sense?
Script: https://scriptbin.works/s/wn9h6
TL;DR: Does my script’s story make sense, or does something need to be fixed?
Any other feedback is also appreciated!
Thank you for your feedback and time!