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This is my first attempt in writing so I'd really value your opinions but please don't be harsh on me.🙈🫰
You can review the story below. Looking forward to hearing from you all.
u/AmitMenon — 5 days ago
This is my first attempt in writing so I'd really value your opinions but please don't be harsh on me.🙈🫰
You can review the story below. Looking forward to hearing from you all.
I've written a slow moving, emotional story. This is my first attempt in writing so I'd really value your opinions but please don't be harsh on me. 🙈
Hi Guys,
I wrote a quiet & emotionally driven short story. Would appreciate the feedback on this one.
This is my first attempt in writing so I'd really value your opinions. But please don't be too harsh🙈
[Please click here to view the story. ] (https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Khu_zHP7tLFlJPKS0jhSAn9k0qFLVD78/view?usp=drivesdk)
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