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Can someone tell me where my rhetorical analysis stands??

In "Go Outside, Sink Your Feet Into the Dirt and Engage With the World.", by Raquel Vasquez, she argues that people must actively engage with nature due it providing emotional, mental, and even personal meaning in life

Raquel employs anecdote in order to emphasize her personal storytelling. By telling her story, the author highlights credibility which creates a sense that makes her story feel more personal and connected, which encourages her audience to engage with nature consistently. As a result, her argument is reinforced, strengthening the overall argument

In addition, Raquel combines both imagery and imperat language in order to further develop her argument. For example, "If I am creatively blocked, I walk barefoot on th earth, no matter the season, allowing stories to feed the roots of my entire body. If I have a plot hole i need to fix, I visit my lemon

and lime basil, staining my fingers with their citrus scents If I need to make my writing more

lyrical, I sit with the dahlias, imagining that their vast genetic possibilities fill me when I speak with them." This combination highlights how beneficial and productive nature could make a person become while creating a desire to constantly have the beauty of nature surrounding the eyes. Consequently, the audience is led to imagining and growing to love the beauty that nature has making the message more persuasive.

While Raquez acknowledges that nature is a cure to any sadness or trouble, she ultimately emphasizes the idea of nature and her predecessors becoming nostalgic and shifting into a broader and lonelier tone. This contrast highlights how easily life could change and reinforces the urgency of honoring legacy and continuing the story once more

By addressing this perspective, the speaker strengthens credibility and encourages the audience

to think and remember their predecessors stories.

In conclusion, Raquez effectively uses anecdote, imperative language, imagery, and a shift in tone to emphasize how important nature is to the soul and that one should cherish it. As she highlights this when she speaks about her grandma's stories, which creates a sense of nostalgia and love for nature while also positioning the audience as spectators in her own story. Ultimately, Raquez successfully persuades her audience to love nature and to cherish every happy moment.

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