My second poem ever I’d appreciate some feedback
I keep you up at night
And sit heavy in your mornings
Like a hum you cannot silence
You feel my name
I crawl beneath your skin
Your nerves spark without warning
Like a wire stripped bare
You feel my name
When relaxing is a luxury
I bloom the moment you lie down
Your teeth grind into silence
Then collapse into morning
You feel my name
My name is pain
A man who is worthless
A man who should have no name
A voice Burned in my brain
Like a carpet that has a stain
A cold winter night
You slept during my nativity
Ice clinging to the windows
Hiding away your Shame
Your snores were much louder
Than my cries that were shrill
A hollow point of view
Or a pointless waste of space
I shout out to god
To cause you much pain
Like a drug straight to the vein
I have hate for you that drives me insane
My blood boils
And my eyes start to strain
You are not my father