u/Alternative_Use_1951

what if there’s a story about a hero, who fights the strongest villain like a lot but throughout the story, it slowly hinted that it’s his butler, who is the strongest in like the world

what if when the support was kicked out of the heroes party he turned off the automatic healing. He was giving them so they started like feeling a lot of pain because if you think about it, why would evolution keep powers like hero extremely rare if it didn’t cause major backlash to the body, so it turned into a wild goose chase onto finding him and getting him back. Before like the end of the year.

i was thinking about a story of a successful lawyer getting killed by a gavel and spawning in a forest with a note saying “time is an ally” soon he figures out he can manipulate time and uses it to pass judgment on corrupt governments and organizations (he appears be showing a clock that is 5 seconds from 12:00 when it hits 12:00 he appears) he uses his power to inflict every wound they have ever had. Any ideas to improve it, Ik it can be