u/Alive-Listen7222

Transition Troubles

I've been messing around with Beepbox for a bit. Sometimes I get little bits of songs that I think sound okay on their own, but I can never incorporate them into actual full-sized songs, which is what I want to do. This is one of those times. This song has some moments that I think are great, but they sound.. (empty? Hollow?) wrong when put into a song with multiple parts.
Any help/tips would be appreciated a bunch! <33

Edit: A lot of my music tastes/inspirations include Jack Stauber, Melanie Martinez (I know she's a sucky person, but a lot of her earlier music holds a deep part of my musical journey), and other "Micropop" groups. I want my music to hold a dreamcore/wierdcore vibe with some irregular instruments or sounds. I love Charlie Puth's Lightswitch for incorporating the actual sound of a light switch being operated.

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u/Alive-Listen7222 — 6 days ago