u/Admirable_Bowl8032

Let Them Change

Hiii so this is like my first poem ever so i would love you guys's feedback please. i love poetry so i would love anyway to get better!!

I’m sad.
And I don’t know why. 
I don’t want to die.

I’m tired of life.
I’m so fricking tired.

I hate racists.
I hate the smiles that encourage them.
I hate the laughter that feeds them.
I hate the people who stand by them.

I hate ableists.
I hate the people who watch and don’t do
Because it affects me and not you.

Do I hate, or am I tired?

Apparently, if it’s funny,
it’s ok.
Apparently spots of kindness
Wash pools of blemishes away
I hate that.
It doesn’t make sense.

Hitler was a racist.
Hitler was an ableist.
Hitler also told jokes.
He showed, at the very least,
A sliver of kindness once.
If Hitler was nice to you would you guys be friends?
Am I making sense?

Who you condone shows the values you uphold.
I’m not white, by the way.
Saying condone isn’t whitewashed.
Big words aren’t just for white people.
Condone is a beautiful word, it rolls off my tongue; I love it
Big words plus black doesn’t equal white

“Show me your friends and I will tell you who you are.”
They’re not them, only like them.
Is that better?
Is that true?

I hate all my friends.
They all suck.

How could they?
They saw me cry, they saw me stim
All because of him
And they went right on
Smiling, laughing, playing

I think I know why I'm sad
I don’t want to die.
I’ll show them their mistakes
I just want them to understand.

Or do I?
What if they already understand?
What if they understand and don’t care?

Maybe they’ll change?
Please, God, let them change.

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u/Admirable_Bowl8032 — 2 days ago

Let Them Change

Hiii so this is like my first poem ever so its lwk gonna suck but i would love you guys's feedback please i love poetry so i would love anyway to get better!!@

I’m sad.
And I don’t know why. 
I don’t want to die.

I’m tired of life.

I hate racists.
I hate the smiles that encourage them.
I hate the laughter that feeds them.
I hate the people who play with them.

I hate ableists.
I hate people who think it doesn’t affect them.
I hate people who don’t defend the defenseless.

Do I hate, or am I tired?

I hate the words 
“He’s funny so it’s ok”
I hate the words 
“She’s nice to me so it doesn’t matter”
I hate them because they don’t make sense.

Hitler was a racist
Hitler was an ableist
Hitler could probably make a joke
He was probably nice to someone
If Hitler was nice to you would you guys be friends?
Am I making sense?

Who you condone shows the values you uphold.
Saying condone doesn’t make me whitewashed
It’s a beautiful word, it rolls off my tongue; I love it
Big words plus black doesn’t equal white
That lie shows what you think of Black people

People reveal a lot from what they say and their friends
Does anyone else see it?

I hate all my friends.
They all suck.

How could they?
They saw me cry, they saw me stim
All because of him
And they went right on
Smiling, laughing, playing.

I think I know why I'm sad
I don’t want to die.
I’ll show them their mistakes
Maybe they’ll change?
Please, God, let them change.

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u/Admirable_Bowl8032 — 3 days ago