u/Additional_Sleep_560

I’m reposting this story. It’s my first and I’m sure there’s lots of things to improve. I posted it once before and it didn’t get comments. I’d seriously like to get better, I would appreciate comments and critiques.

Here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aaqIYkBVoHQnJre19sazmcIuU\_5aNNimpexzv7YX4cw/edit?usp=sharing