u/Active-Definition-88

I think trying to add a crime element in my story was the worst thing I did. I don't know if people stopped reading there. I just have so much fun writing my story.

Story name- Cheating for once

I want to understand that what happens when I write the things like that. So basically, the things which I have written with the symbol and I want them to start, like happen together. So will it work if I write it like this? I get really confused with this time, so I just wanted to make sure.

So now Sawyer is jealous? Well well well. Quite the hypocrite. I just cannot tolerate this guy.

Please leave my girl alone😭. And before this the best friend scene happened. I just feel so sad for the girl. I will complete reading the story because I want to see her happy.

And his sister actually treats Cerise like thrash. I would have smacked the shit out of the sister.

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The way Amy's father treats Amy. My younger spoiled sister energy can never tolerate that😭. Like okay I understand that you care about her but no you cannot keep her in the dark. He infurates me so much.

The reason she ran after him is also because she doesn't know the level of danger she is in. She is constantly being kept in the dark.

It really infurates me to think that something is revolving around me but I am not aware of it. I don't think that anyone has the right to take decisions on my behalf without even informing me.

Before peopl come at me. I am not against the story. At all. I am enjoying the story and that is the reason I took my time and gave my opinion on the storyline.

Also I wanted to ask Do you tend to change people's look even if it does not match the description or ethnicity? Honestly I really like customising all my characters the same way.

Is this really how authors place the speechbubbles?

PS- I find my dialogues cringe so I hid them.

I want a royal story with a good fashion sense🤣. Yup that is very important for me.

Right now I am reading this story and it is quite nice. The outfits are also slay.

Also I am excited to see how their love story progresses. It has not been updated for a few months so I want to read the next few chapters and then wait for an update.

Is this music available for community writers? If yes then what is the name of the music?

A few days ago I made a post about outfit item repitation. I am currently reading saucy, sassy bossy. The girl repeated so many items in the same scene and I am glad that she did. Everything looks so fancy People who love outfits should definately read it.

Unfortunately I cannot comment on the story right now because I just started. But till now I am enjoying it.

Is anyone else facing this issue? I am so so frustrated with this. I WANT MY PRIZES. I AM READING