u/Acrobatic_Wing219

Hi! I’m working on an original dark seinen manga with political, military and fantasy themes, and I’d love some feedback on my art style and overall atmosphere.

The manga page is only a rough draft of the prologue for testing paneling and pacing, and the second page shows my main character.

I’m especially looking for critique about:
- anatomy
- expressions
- paneling/pacing
- mood and readability

I’m aiming for a serious, unsettling tone rather than a typical shounen style.

Any advice or criticism is appreciated!