Hey everyone—would love some quick feedback from fellow writers and maybe even producers here. I've shared this a few times on stage32 (I know the common opinion there, but I've at leasted ended up with an Email introduction) and always love the feedback and engagement.
I’ve been developing a satirical dramedy called House of Cardboard. The premise: after a global financial collapse, collectible trading cards become the world’s new currency, and a struggling card shop owner suddenly finds himself at the center of a chaotic new economy. I've developed a pretty solid franchise foundation with an entire built in animated universe that is essentially Pokémon overdosed on capitalism where real animals are modified and sold, complete with pay walls like your shady cell phone provider.
Think Blackmonday with trading cards.
I’m at the stage where I’m refining the pilot and starting to get it in front of people, and I've gotten great feedback on the concept and even some read requests.
I'd love some more feedback and in open to messages and support from anyone who might enjoy the concept. I'm happy to share and hear and tips and suggestions and maybe even some advice on how to get this in good hands. I'm modest about my writing but absolutely confident in my concept and truly believe anyone who gives this a chance won't regret it.
Appreciate any thoughts! This is a great community.