u/Accurate_Pear3512

Hi, I recently started making cinematic emotional story reels inspired by visual novels/anime-style storytelling.

This is my first serious attempt at creating a short emotional episode with motion, dialogue, pacing, and cinematic editing.

I’d genuinely love honest feedback:

What emotion did you feel while watching?

Did the pacing feel too slow?

Was the beginning engaging enough?

What part felt weakest?

I’m trying to improve my storytelling and editing, so constructive criticism would really help.