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Dear [agent],
I am writing to seek representation for my standalone adult fantasy romance novel, THE GOLDEN YEARS, as it aligns with your interest in stories with [personalization].
Aurora Solenne and Kaiden Darkmoor are the heirs of the two most important bloodlines, whose magic keeps the rest of the world alive. In public, they’re forced to act as best friends to present a united front, but secretly, they despise each other. One rule has always remained: both heirs must never be romantically involved. They must each produce an heir to carry on their separate bloodlines – if not, it could mean the end of humanity.
Every summer, they go on press tours around the world to promote peace between the two magical species, the Sun-blooded and Moon-blooded. For thousands of years, war has raged between them, and a resistance has formed against the Moon-blooded, protesting that their dark magic is too dangerous. Another war is on the horizon, and Aurora is determined to create a world where peace is possible. However, selfishly, she spends more time partying and chasing fame than preparing for war.
As Aurora and Kaiden grow older, they can no longer ignore the connection they’ve always shared. Despite their lingering hatred and constant bickering, no one else understands the pressure of their lives the way they do. They share a kiss that they instantly regret, but from that point on, they find themselves unable to stay away from each other.
Years pass in a blur of press tours, interviews, and countless careers Aurora pursues, but no matter how much their lives change, the one thing that never changes is their feelings toward each other. As war breaks out across the world, the Solenne and Darkmoor families struggle to maintain peace.
At thirty years old, Aurora and Kaiden will take over their parents’ roles as the leaders of the world, then marry and produce heirs. Running away together isn’t an option; their responsibilities mean secrecy can’t last, and if the public found out, their trust would be shattered. Aurora must face an impossible choice: follow the life set out for her, or stay with the only person she’s ever truly loved.
Complete at 95,000 words, THE GOLDEN YEARS blends the character-driven, contemporary fantasy elements of The Invisible Life of Addie LaRue by V.E. Schwab with the political tension and magical conflict of Red City by Marie Lu.
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