u/Abedo0o0

Hello fellow pharaohs,

After two months of grinding to gather my work from the last nine years, my portfolio is finally live. (Click Here)

I’d love to get your perspective on it. Whether it’s the projects, the storytelling, my positioning, or the design choices, tell me what works and what flops. Specifically, I want to know if the rougher edges are dealbreakers for potential clients, or if they’re just minor UX gripes that I’m overthinking.

For disclosure, I know nothing about coding so I used AI to create the webpage. However, 95% of the content is mine, I intentionally didn’t outsource the writing/content because I wanted it to feel authentic and human. Still, I sometimes feel like parts of it could be simplified.

One thing I’m particularly curious about: does it come across like one of those generic AI-generated slops that are flooding the internet? I tried to keep it as human as possible, but I'd love an outside look to see if I actually succeeded.

I didn’t want to lead with that question and bias your feedback, but it’s honestly my biggest concern.

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u/Abedo0o0 — 10 days ago

Hello beautiful people,

I just shipped my portfolio after way too long. not a UI/UX designer (it shows lol) but i'm looking for real feedback before I start sending this around.

Genuinely curious what lands and what doesn't - whether it's the work itself, how I'm telling the story, positioning myself, the design choices, whatever. if you scroll through, lemme know...

Does the narrative actually make sense? Does it tell you who I am? What actually hooked you (or made you want to bail)? Any moments that felt clunky or confusing?

Design-wise, does it feel cohesive or all over the place? Would you actually care enough to reach out about working together?

Heads up: it's not perfect - obviously. :) And it loads slower than I'd like. I compressed everything to WebP, optimized where I could, but it is still so slow. But anyways that's separate from whether the content is landing. So yeah—be brutal. The feedback that stings usually helps the most.

Here's the link to my portfolio:

https://mohnna.work/

Thanks ALOT for taking the time 🙏

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u/Abedo0o0 — 19 days ago