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DROWNING IN YOU - Short - 4 pages

*Drowning in You*

*Short Script*

*4 Pages*

*Psychological Horror*

*Lena navigates a turbulent romance whilst forced to reconcile with the scars of her past.*

I'm feeling a bit out of practice and low on confidence (particularly when it comes to the flow and structure of my dialogue). I'm wondering if people feel grabbed at all by this opening? Any and all feedback is welcomed :) thanks for reading!

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