u/33omnia

You Should Know

You Should Know .

I am not strong willed.

I do not demand respect.

I am not a sunset and a tequila sour.

Match strike, passion ignite, burn bright,

Haze at morning light.

I am not woman who takes no shit

and tastes blood

and wields words like

lightning.

No cinders in my wake.

Nor do I set the sky ablaze.

I do not burn.

My tears do not swell

when my heart is broken.

No spiraling grief or swirling,

drowning or drip-drop doubts.

I do not bring flood waters

nor meander through life.

My touch is not light and fleeting like rain.

My words do not pour.

My love does not ebb.

I do not flow.

I do not talk when no one is listening

or get carried away by music,

or dance at concerts, smoke,

or laugh freely.

I do not go where I am not welcomed,

hold my arms out

and let the wind take me

or bend without breaking.

I am not an acrobat.

Or a breeze on summer's day.

I do not breathe easy.

I lay on the ground.

Eyes like moss.

Friendships for a lifetime

growing stronger, constant and quiet.

I smell of strong coffee

and petrichor.

Absorb words like arrows

And grow flowers from scars.

Broken and remade in seasons.

I bend like bamboo.

Smile like dawn.

I hide my shadow like the moon.

And offer shade and kindness to those

Who burn and flow and breathe easy.

I'm here and I'm not going anywhere.

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Longtime writer; new to poetry. Is it terrible? What works and what doesn't? You can be honest. I'm used to critique groups.

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Link 1

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/YJ7SUUQFzu

Link 2

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/aQxELZP0t8

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