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[The Story of Maria] Part 4: Before The Storm

Previously: Mrs. Clain appeared at the ruins

and heard the same mysterious voice that

had spoken to the group. She told Professor

Fred — "I think he has come back" — and

Fred's face said he already knew exactly

who she meant.

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Professor Fred straightens himself —

trying to hold onto logic — and speaks

in a low, serious voice:

"Clain. This is not the time for jokes."

Mrs. Clain looks at him — directly —

with an intensity that silences him

immediately.

"Fred."

She steps closer.

"I could never forget that voice."

A pause.

"And you know it too."

Her eyes don't leave his.

"You know exactly whose voice that was."

There is nothing he can say to that.

Nothing at all.

Because she is right.

Maria is still unconscious on the ground.

Growing paler by the minute. Her breathing

slow and shallow — each breath coming

a little harder than the last.

"We need to move," Mrs. Clain says.

"Get all the students on the buses — now."

Fred, his voice barely holding together:

"Clain... what is going to happen?"

Before she can answer — Sophie and Alex

emerge from the deeper part of the ruins —

carefully carrying Maria between them —

her arms draped over their shoulders,

her feet barely touching the ground.

The moment the other students see Maria's

unconscious body — pale, limp, barely

breathing — panic ripples through

the entire crowd instantly.

Questions fly through the rain-heavy air:

"What happened to her?"

"Is she okay?"

"What's going on?"

"Why isn't she waking up?"

Nobody has answers.

And then — the sky decides to answer

for them.

Without warning — the clouds above

turn black.

Not the natural dark of a night sky.

Something heavier. Something angrier.

A thunderstorm tears open above them —

lightning splitting the sky in half —

and rain begins hammering down —

violent, relentless, like something

with a purpose.

Like something that did not want

them to leave.

Students scatter — running for the

buses — slipping on the wet ground —

bags and jackets flying everywhere.

Mrs. Clain raises her voice above

the roar of the storm — above the

thunder and the rain and the chaos:

"EVERYONE LISTEN TO ME."

The group freezes.

"Something very bad is about to happen

here. We need to leave — right now —

all of you — get on the buses — MOVE!"

She turns to grab Fred one last time —

rain already plastering her hair

against her face — her blazer soaked

through in seconds:

"Fred. We go. Now."

She looks at him with an expression

he has never seen on her face before.

"There is no more time to talk."

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To be continued in Part 5: She Was Here

Written by Mohit Rajput

The Story of Maria — Season 1

Glastonbury, England — 1992

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[The Story of Maria] Part 3: The Escape

Previously: Maria collapsed after Jasper

held her hand inside the ancient ruins.

A mysterious voice said "Welcome back, Maria"

— and Mrs. Clain arrived, only to hear

the same voice call out to her too.

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And then — without warning — the words

escape Mrs. Clain's lips.

"Please... forgive me. It wasn't my fault."

Jasper, barely holding himself together,

shouts at her:

"Mrs. Clain! What mistake are you talking

about?! What is happening here?!"

Ethan, his voice trembling, steps forward:

"Miss... what was that voice?

Who is out there?"

Mrs. Clain's voice, when it finally comes,

is barely above a whisper — shaking with

a fear that has no name:

"He is back."

A pause.

"We need to get out of here. Right now."

She turns to the group — all pretense

of control completely gone — and the

students realize something in that moment

that they will never forget.

Their teacher — the woman who had never

once shown weakness — was terrified.

"Pick Maria up. NOW. Move!"

She rushes outside and screams at the

remaining students scattered across

the ruins:

"This trip is over. We are leaving.

Everyone — on the buses — immediately!"

Professor Fred, who had been waiting

near the entrance, looks completely

blindsided:

"But the trip just started—"

Mrs. Clain grabs his arm — pulling him

away from the students — her voice

dropping to a frightened, urgent hiss:

"Fred... I think he has come back."

Professor Fred goes very still.

The rain outside has started —

just a few drops at first — but

growing heavier by the second.

His voice, when he finally speaks,

is barely audible above the sound

of the students rushing past them:

"What are you talking about?"

He shakes his head slowly.

"He... he can't come back."

His eyes search her face —

looking for any sign that she

is wrong — that this is a mistake —

that the voice they both clearly

recognized belonged to someone else.

He finds no such sign.

"That's impossible."

He swallows hard.

"Who are you talking about?"

But deep down — in the part of him

that he had spent years trying to forget —

Fred already knew.

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To be continued in Part 4: Before The Storm

Written by Mohit Rajput

The Story of Maria — Season 1

Glastonbury, England — 1992

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[The Story of Maria] Part 2: The Voice

[The Story of Maria] Part 2: The Voice

Previously: Maria collapsed after Jasper

held her hand inside the ancient ruins.

A strange voice said "Welcome back, Maria"

— and now Mrs. Clain has arrived.

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The entire group freezes in absolute terror.

Jasper's face turns bright red — drenched

in sweat — his hands shaking as he stares

down at Maria's unconscious body on the

cold stone floor of the ruins.

And then — from somewhere behind them —

a voice speaks.

A heavy, deep voice. The kind that could

not have come from any normal human being.

"Welcome back, Maria."

Before anyone can process what just happened,

their college teacher appears from the darkness.

Mrs. Clain.

She looks at the group — at their terrified

faces — at Maria lying unconscious on the

ground — and demands:

"What are you all doing here in the

middle of the night?!"

She steps closer, scanning every corner

of the ruins with sharp eyes.

"What on earth is going on here?"

And then the voice returns. Deeper this time.

More deliberate.

"Oh, Mrs. Clain... so you are here too."

A pause.

"Welcome. Back. In the past."

The moment those words land — something

changes in Mrs. Clain's face.

The color drains from her skin.

Her jaw tightens.

Her eyes go wide — not with confusion —

but with recognition.

As if something she had buried long ago

had just found its way back.

She had heard that voice before.

She knew exactly whose it was.

And that knowledge terrified her.

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To be continued in Part 3: The Escape...

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Written by Mohit Rajput

The Story of Maria — Season 1

Glastonbury, England — 1992

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[MF] The Story of Maria | Part 1: The Introduction — A supernatural thriller set in 1992 England

This story begins in a place that feels

almost too strange to be real.

A place that seems unrealistic — yet it exists.

Maria is an 18-year-old girl who has just

started college. Among all her classmates,

she is the most straightforward — yet the

most sensible and intelligent one in the

entire group.

Maria's past is deeply strange. Painful.

Sorrowful. So mysterious that even she

herself does not fully know what happened

or why. Some things about her past remain

unknown — even to her.

But right now, in this moment, Maria is

standing inside an old abandoned ruin with

her group of friends.

They are here on their college trip — their

very first trip together as a group. These

people have only recently become friends,

and this is just the beginning of what they

thought would be a simple, memorable journey.

The ruins are ancient. Stone walls crumbling.

Vines crawling across broken arches. The air

feels heavy — like the place remembers things

that people have long forgotten.

A campfire burns in the center of the group.

Eight camping chairs arranged in a circle

around it. The night sky above — dark, vast,

and silent.

Everything feels normal.

Until it doesn't.

Suddenly, Maria's friend Jasper moves from

his spot across the circle. He comes closer

to her — leans in slightly — and asks in

a quiet, curious voice:

"Maria... how many people are there

in your family?"

And then — he holds her hand.

The moment Jasper's hand touches hers,

Maria feels it.

A sharp, violent electric shock — shooting

through her entire body — as if lightning

itself had reached down and struck her from

the inside.

Not a small shock.

Not a simple static spark.

Something ancient. Something that knew

exactly what it was doing.

Maria's eyes go blank.

Her body goes limp.

And just like that —

Maria collapses.

The campfire keeps burning.

Indifferent.

Calm.

As if it already knew this would happen.

To be continued in Part 2: The Voice...

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Written by Mohit Rajput

The Story of Maria — Season 1

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