u/-masher

How will I know if you love me, or what your life feels like?

You took the time to get to know me only cos you were obliged

I don't know where obligation ends

And relationship has formed

And I wonder if I do love thee

Or talking footy scores

And film scores and other things

We've never had the chance

To test run what it is we have

With freedom for romance

 

A house on the beach is what I see when I picture you and I

But why have I made a house for us with nothing but my mind?

You don't know me

I don't know thee

Not deeply anyway

Where friendship ends and love begins

Who's qualified to say

I know it seems real muddy now

But I can't seem to stop

Wondering what waits for us

If we gave space for love

 

I wanna know if you love me and what your love feels like...

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Alone I sit.

With those that care, nearby,

stressed about how I spend my time,

telling me protect the future,

save some cash.

But I feel,

Deep within,

by living true, I'm doing that.

They say I'm wasting all my time

with little noises, little lines,

laughing at a joke of mine.

Well that's the way I see it.

I can't help it if I be it.

If I be a soul that asks the questions

that leave me dazed within my senses,

and make me want to find out more,

look around what's on my course,

and investigate my little path

see where it takes my little heart.

It scares you.

At first me too,

but I grew to like not knowing what to do.

I'm sure it will all be fine,

alone I think, in this room of mine.

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